Wednesday, 18 March 2015
My Language Feature Goal Term 1 Week 7
I was playing perfectly normally when my brother took me and dumped me in it, with a splash of oil, carrots and oinons. He started stirring his ingredients like a Master Chef. I was amused, I did not know what he was doing. There was a soupy smell and suddenly, my bottom felt warm ...
Let me tell you about the day my brother tried to cook me!
My goal was to show not tell. I did this by not telling the reader from the beginning that I was being cooked!
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WOW!!!!!! you really used your goal in that piece of writing.
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