Roar.
I turned.
A female lion with cubs was behind me.
I screamed. I climbed up the nearest tree. BIG mistake!
She climbed up after me. I was scared. But then a big bird came up and picked me up and saved me!
I was learning how to use simple sentences in my workshop. Simple sentences can add suspense to writing.
I turned.
A female lion with cubs was behind me.
I screamed. I climbed up the nearest tree. BIG mistake!
She climbed up after me. I was scared. But then a big bird came up and picked me up and saved me!
I was learning how to use simple sentences in my workshop. Simple sentences can add suspense to writing.
Great use of simple sentences Molly.
ReplyDeleteHi Molly, great language to make simple sentences affective.It really was suspensful!
ReplyDeleteHi Molly
ReplyDeleteyou used a range of similes and good exiting language